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Evil Ed :: Fright Night (2011) ([personal profile] socoolbrewster) wrote in [personal profile] bargemods 2012-01-11 12:25 pm (UTC)

Re: REVISION REQUEST 2/2

Sample Journal Entry the Second:

[Sent from Zero]

[PUBLIC]

[There's a pissed-off moody teenage vampire glowering Death at you all, Barge. Behind him you can see the room's been clawed to hell and back, deep scores dug into just about every surface he could reach. Now he's just sitting, seething, and still half morphed.]

That's right, lock me up. I see how it is. I'm sorry, did I hurt somebody's poor widdle feewings? You try to live off a "fun size" bag of chips twice a day for a week and tell me how it works out for you. Fine, I did bad and I got stuck in permanent detention until somebody gets their head out of their ass, but come on. I yam what I yam, and what I yam is fucking starving. I can't live like this.

Next asshole I see is hamburger meat, I don't even care.

[PRIVATE to Jerry. ...well. He tries, anyway.]

I...

[All the hesitation.]

I'm sorry. I was only trying to get a snack, I didn't mean to go that far.

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