We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval. Please post your revisions within 72 hours, or we will reject your application.
We'd like to see more expansion of the personality section with context and examples of the traits you've listed therein. We also need to hear more about why Revan should be a warden, and a better explanation of the powers you're interested in him keeping on board the Barge.
REVISIONS
We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval. Please post your revisions within 72 hours, or we will reject your application.
We'd like to see more expansion of the personality section with context and examples of the traits you've listed therein. We also need to hear more about why Revan should be a warden, and a better explanation of the powers you're interested in him keeping on board the Barge.