We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval. Please post your revisions within 72 hours, or we will reject your application.
As Teddy is a very borderline inmate due to the reasoning listed, we'd like to see more expansion on that justification in the personality section or more correlation with the personality in the inmate justification. Either there's not a lot in the personality section about why his actions in the listed instances are murky or suspect, or there's no mention in the inmate justification section about learning to be his own person, or both.
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We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval. Please post your revisions within 72 hours, or we will reject your application.
As Teddy is a very borderline inmate due to the reasoning listed, we'd like to see more expansion on that justification in the personality section or more correlation with the personality in the inmate justification. Either there's not a lot in the personality section about why his actions in the listed instances are murky or suspect, or there's no mention in the inmate justification section about learning to be his own person, or both.