We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval. Please post your revisions within 72 hours, or we will reject your application.
We'd like a little more clarity on the point of Connor's feelings about and control over his actions. If Connor does not have free will of his own, he is a very borderline inmate, since he would not be held accountable for actions his programming left him no choice but to take. We'd like to see more expansion on that justification in the personality section or more correlation with the personality in the inmate justification.
REVISIONS
We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval. Please post your revisions within 72 hours, or we will reject your application.
We'd like a little more clarity on the point of Connor's feelings about and control over his actions. If Connor does not have free will of his own, he is a very borderline inmate, since he would not be held accountable for actions his programming left him no choice but to take. We'd like to see more expansion on that justification in the personality section or more correlation with the personality in the inmate justification.