We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval.
Your network sample is a little sparse, so we'd like an additional sample or an expansion of the existing one. We appreciate that Miles can be shy, but we'd still like a little more thorough demonstration of what his dialogue is like. Remember, you can give samples imagining Miles has been on board for some time, or use test drive threads.
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We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval.
Your network sample is a little sparse, so we'd like an additional sample or an expansion of the existing one. We appreciate that Miles can be shy, but we'd still like a little more thorough demonstration of what his dialogue is like. Remember, you can give samples imagining Miles has been on board for some time, or use test drive threads.