We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval. Please post your revisions within 72 hours, or we will reject your application.
While we understand that Tup is a minor character, we'd still like a little more personality. Specifically, you've told us what traits can be inferred from his screen time, but we'd like to know how you view him when putting those traits together, and who he is on the inside. What most drives him? Who does he think he is, and who does he want to be? How does his insecurity affect him, and when?
REVISIONS
We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval. Please post your revisions within 72 hours, or we will reject your application.
While we understand that Tup is a minor character, we'd still like a little more personality. Specifically, you've told us what traits can be inferred from his screen time, but we'd like to know how you view him when putting those traits together, and who he is on the inside. What most drives him? Who does he think he is, and who does he want to be? How does his insecurity affect him, and when?