We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval.
You've done a great job of giving us a broad overview of his history and personality, but we'd love to hear more specifics! In particular, we'd like more explanation and analysis of:
- Serious crimes committed, and details about the harm he's done to others. You say he's killed countless people, he dehumanizes those who aren't his own citizens, and he has several acts of manipulation and betrayal under his belt; we're interested in hearing more about specific incidents in which he's done these things.
- How will he react to being on the Barge?
- How will he react to being wardened? What sorts of wardening styles would he be likely to respond best to, and conversely, what wardening styles would likely be ineffective or unhelpful?
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We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval.
You've done a great job of giving us a broad overview of his history and personality, but we'd love to hear more specifics! In particular, we'd like more explanation and analysis of:
- Serious crimes committed, and details about the harm he's done to others. You say he's killed countless people, he dehumanizes those who aren't his own citizens, and he has several acts of manipulation and betrayal under his belt; we're interested in hearing more about specific incidents in which he's done these things.
- How will he react to being on the Barge?
- How will he react to being wardened? What sorts of wardening styles would he be likely to respond best to, and conversely, what wardening styles would likely be ineffective or unhelpful?