We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval.
1) We're interested in hearing more about his potential for undergoing internal changes while he works to find his own purpose. Even if he's never going to be a good person, could he still, for example, come to understand that avoiding harm to others is important in its own right, rather than just an arbitrary restriction imposed by a warden? What migh a "strict sort of consequence system he cares about" look like in practice?
2) We'd like to hear more about his early life trauma, and how it affected him beyond contributing to his general misanthropy. You say he doesn't believe that his trauma helped make him what he is today; to what degree is he right vs. wrong about this? Is this an opinion that might change in any way during his time on the Barge?
3) Even if a character isn't capable of actually dying in canon, we do want immortal inmates coming aboard to experience something as close to its finality as possible, to maintain the vibes of "the Admiral is giving inmates a second chance at life after a life-ending mishap", rather than "the Admiral is stealing inmates from the lives that they're currently living". How easily would he be able to recover from his canon injuries on his own? If the answer is "very easily, he really does just need time", we'd like this mildly tweaked to make the situation a bit more dire for him, even if it involves slightly AUing canon facts/events!
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We thank you for taking the time to apply to Last Voyages. Overall, the moderators like and approve of your application; however, we do have some things we need clarification on before we can provide you with a final approval.
1) We're interested in hearing more about his potential for undergoing internal changes while he works to find his own purpose. Even if he's never going to be a good person, could he still, for example, come to understand that avoiding harm to others is important in its own right, rather than just an arbitrary restriction imposed by a warden? What migh a "strict sort of consequence system he cares about" look like in practice?
2) We'd like to hear more about his early life trauma, and how it affected him beyond contributing to his general misanthropy. You say he doesn't believe that his trauma helped make him what he is today; to what degree is he right vs. wrong about this? Is this an opinion that might change in any way during his time on the Barge?
3) Even if a character isn't capable of actually dying in canon, we do want immortal inmates coming aboard to experience something as close to its finality as possible, to maintain the vibes of "the Admiral is giving inmates a second chance at life after a life-ending mishap", rather than "the Admiral is stealing inmates from the lives that they're currently living". How easily would he be able to recover from his canon injuries on his own? If the answer is "very easily, he really does just need time", we'd like this mildly tweaked to make the situation a bit more dire for him, even if it involves slightly AUing canon facts/events!